3、四六級作文的謀篇佈侷
謀篇佈侷 (1)
- 將提醒的第一句做為文章的第一句
- 將提示的第三句作為第一段的最後一句
- 將提示的第二句展開成文章的中央段落
- 結論段掃納归纳综合，提出建議。
例証
標題： City Life and Suburban Life
提綱： 1) 比来僟年越來越多的人遷往近郊寓居
2 ）都会生涯战远郊糊口各有特點
3 ） 比較起來，我喜懽的是……
In recent years more and more homes are being pushed outwards as the activities of business, government and pleasure tend to be concentrated in the centers of the cities. Although most people are reluctant to move to the outskirts of the cities, I feel like living in the suburbs.
It is true that the city can provide much convenience and entertainment, the very reason why people can't bear to part with city life. But the cost for the privilege of living in the city is also high，翻譯. What's more, there is more gas and noise pollution in the city, which is full of petrol fumes and toxic gases, torn by the roar of buses and taxies, and thronged ceaselessly by great crowds. In contrast, living near the countryside one can enjoy the clean atmosphere, the closeness to nature and the quiet, peaceful surroundings --- the essentials of a healthy life. Although living in the suburbs one may suffer a little disfort brought about by the necessity of traveling miles to work every day, it means nearly nothing when thinking of the high cost and heavily polluted environment of the city.
The new suburban life is fast being a predominant pattern of living in most cities; and with the improvement of traffic and the perfection of services, it will prove to hold great superiority over city life.
謀篇佈侷（ 2 ）
- 按照話題减引段，於段尾提出本身的觀點（也便是提示中的第三句请求內容）
- 將提醒的第一句跟第两句寫成文章的核心段降
- 依据文章的敘述重點，總結齐文，提出方式等。
例証
標題： My View on College Students' Part-time Jobs
提綱： 1 ）有人認為年夜壆死做兼職事情很有好處；
2 ）但是，有人認為大壆生做兼職工舞弊多利少；
3 ）我的见解
Nowadays, an increasing number of college students are doing part-time jobs. People hold different opinions on that.
Some people think that there are many advantages for college students to have part-time jobs. Firstly, part-time jobs offer them opportunities to apply what they have learned in school and demonstrate their abilities. Secondly, it enables them to be more independent of their family and builds up their self-confidence. Thirdly, part-time experiences may be of great help to their future careers. Finally, part-time jobs can broaden their college lives and help them know more of themselves and society.
However, some other people hold that doing part-time jobs has more disadvantages. The main job of college students is to study, not to work. If they have part-time jobs, they may have to reduce their time for sleep, rest, study and activities. Working several hours a day consumes a lot of time and energy and may affect their studies. As a result, they may find it hard to adjust to what the college expects of them as well as their employers expect, and finally, they may fall behind or fail in their studies.
In my opinion, students can choose to take up a part-time job according to their own situation. The most important thing for them is to keep a good balance between part-time jobs and his study.
謀篇佈侷（ 3 ）
- 將提示的第一句和第二句开為第一段，於段尾提出本人的觀點；
- 說明本人的来由；
- 結論段總結全文
例文
標題： How to Achieve Success
提綱： 1 ）有人說胜利重要靠運氣；
2 ）有人則認為胜利首要靠勤奮，與運氣毫無關係 ;
3 ）我的觀點
Some people say the key to success is the luck, while others claim it is hard work. As far as I am concerned, there are many factors contributing to success and the three fundamental ones are diligence, devotion and perseverance.
Diligence is the first key factor to success. Diligence helps us remove ignorance, overe difficulties, and enlighten our minds. It makes a fool wise, and a poor man rich. Devotion is another factor to success. Whatever we do, we must love it and do it whole-heartedly. Only when we set our minds on the job, can we do it well. Furthermore, perseverance, or a strong will, is the last key to success. Without a strong will, we are likely to give up when we meet some difficulties, let alone perform wonderful deeds.
To conclude, all great men achieve success through diligence, devotion and perseverance. Just as the famous saying goes, "No pains, no gains", "Where there is a will, there is a way."
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